how to begin with him? he claims to be strictly a "bottom" submissive only to his lovers desires but i can see so much more within him and so we begin as he wishes each of us playing our prescribed roles and i dominate him utterly using him to roughly satiate my lusts and in the afterglow tenderness my arms tightly around him gentle

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    Dennis Saran  September 11, 2014 at 4:35 am

    this poem was my first attempt at writing a love scene between two men. turned out pretty good huh?

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    Alan  December 13, 2014 at 5:20 pm

    Love it, Dennis. Funnily enough, I read this imagining the narrator as female – it wasn’t until I read your comment that I realised it could be read either way. 🙂 Double the fun!

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      Dennis Saran  April 16, 2015 at 8:14 pm

      thank you Alan, i haven’t logged in in a while, and just noticed your comment, i have written a few poems where i intentionally leave out gender specific pronouns, so that the reader can imagine it either way. this is still the only one i have done that was envisioned as between two men. i’m glad you enjoyed it
      ~Dennis

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